DESPIES BY MACKSWORDS
Aren and Liora stand together at the evidence desk as the recovered core passes into Tessaran custody.

A DESPIES WEBCOMIC · EPISODE 07 / TERMS OF RETURN

FALSE
COURTESY

One piece of evidence.
Two loyalties to test.

TESSARA · OUTSIDE THE SPOTLIGHT

A place was reserved.
Something was required.

Previously: a dangerous medical arrival brought four survivors to Tessara. Eight technicians remain unaccounted for. A passenger’s testimony and a reserved return authorization revealed that Director Halven was expected to travel with the carriage.

Under civic supervision, Aren Voss and Liora Serat help investigate the core left in the annex. Its records may explain the transfer—and why someone is already coming to collect it.

Mature themes · Coercion, captivity, threats and non-graphic violence.

VEYRAN COMPACT

“Mr Vale”

Cover: infrastructure risk adviser.
Real name: Aren Voss.

ORDAN LEAGUE

“Ms Senn”

Cover: technical partnerships representative.
Real name: Liora Serat.

EPISODE 07 · EIGHT ILLUSTRATED SCENES

Terms of Return

An intact core. An amended order. A concession neither can quietly undo.

07 / TERMS OF RETURN
Text version
01

00:18 · Annex equipment examination room

What survives a clearing

The engineers opened the annex from the service side after isolating its machinery. They did not touch the receiving controller. Dava sent an officer with the inspection team and kept both spies outside. When the core reached the examination room, it was still locked in its cradle. Halven supplied the release sequence on record. The wafer beside it could no longer be read. Ressa asked the engineer to turn the core until its maintenance port faced the camera.

Ressa and a municipal engineer examine the copper calibration core in a protective cradle while Aren watches.

RessaThe booth archive clears. This keeps its own service history.

EngineerSigned maintenance events. We can test whether they’ve been altered. That doesn’t make every entry honest.

ValeDoes removing the core clear them?

EngineerNot if we preserve its state.

Aren remembered a line in his collection instructions: housing intact, service state preserved. He had assumed his employers wanted the calibration settings. He told Dava about the instruction before she had to ask. Liora watched the engineer attach a read-only adapter. Halven’s promised wartime correction chain was on the unreadable wafer, not in this hardware log. She waited for someone to offer a clever way of recovering it. Nobody did.

SennYou were told not to reset it.

ValeYes. I didn’t know why.

DavaGive me the instruction as you received it.

02

00:25 · Municipal custody booth

The price of a seat

Dava laid a copy of the return authorization against the glass. Halven read it without lifting his head. Liora stood beside her, her injured hand protected against her coat. The director asked whether the core had been recovered. Dava asked why the carriage had a place reserved for him. For several seconds the only sound was the ventilation fan.

Halven bargains through the custody glass with Dava and Liora, his composure beginning to fail.

HalvenThey required the hardware. I was to bring it through after the demonstration.

SennFour people were your demonstration?

HalvenFour people returned through a working receiver. That was what the client wanted verified.

DavaAnd the other eight?

HalvenAssigned to a construction site. I wasn’t given their release terms.

He gave them a contract suffix and told them which service event it should accompany. The engineer confirmed a matching entry over Dava’s earpiece. It established that Halven knew the record, not that his account of the people was true. When she asked for the client’s name, he looked toward the door. He wanted protected custody outside the contractor’s reach before saying more. Dava explained that he was already entitled to protection from harm. She would not trade immunity for a name.

HalvenYou don’t understand who can find me.

DavaThen tell us what access they have.

SennYou knew they could find the workers’ families. You signed anyway.

03

00:31 · The corridor outside examination

An advantage denied

While Aren supplied his collection instructions, Liora asked Dava to retain the core under Tessaran authority and refuse any faction’s private recovery claim. Dava said that was already her intention, then entered the request in the incident record. Aren saw it when the commander asked both spies to identify their access tools. He waited until they stepped into the corridor, still within sight of the supervising officer.

Aren and Liora face each other at close range in a narrow rainlit station corridor.

ValeYou asked her to keep it from me.

SennFrom both our governments.

ValeYou could have told me.

SennWould you have agreed?

ValeYou didn’t ask.

She stood close enough that he could see where the medic’s tape had caught a strand of hair against her collar. He remembered smoothing that collar for a camera earlier in the night. She followed his glance and pulled the strand free with her left hand. Neither stepped away. The silence held until the officer called them back to the desk.

SennTell me you wouldn’t have tried to take a copy.

ValeI was looking for a way.

SennThen you understand the request.

ValeI understand why you made it.

04

00:37 · Receiver desk · remote witness call

The order already issued

The maintenance log carried a contractor service code that Tovan’s retained index could explain. Through his advocate, Dava requested a short call. He answered from Mara’s study after confirming that the call would not expose his husband’s location. On screen, he enlarged the order and found its original issue time: 21:12, before the spies’ credentials appeared in the control log. It was a standing contingency for a failed service cycle, not a response invented after the rescue.

Dava and Ressa examine a service authorization during a call with Tovan as a recovery vehicle approaches the guarded court.

TovanThat authorizes recovery of damaged equipment. It doesn’t authorize disposal.

RessaThe vehicle outside has a disposal rig.

TovanThen check the attachment. The ones we retained don’t match.

A licensed contractor crew had arrived at the outer cordon with authentic dispatch credentials. Three workers had been admitted to the examination bay under escort to identify their assigned equipment. Nobody had granted a removal. Tovan showed Dava where the disposal authority had been added after issue. She ordered the vehicle held, every access pass suspended and the equipment bay stopped. Ressa called the officer inside that bay directly.

DavaNobody moves equipment. Keep the crew apart while we verify the order.

TovanThey’ll tell you it’s a routine amendment.

DavaThey can explain it on the record.

05

00:39 · Equipment examination bay

Before the tool touches metal

The stop order reached the bay as a worker called Kelm lifted a powered cutter from the tools he had declared at entry. He was meant to identify its service connector for the escort. Instead, he struck the officer with the handle and lunged toward the shield over the core. Aren caught the movement from the doorway. He redirected the cutter arm with his left hand and drove Kelm against the trolley’s outer rail. Dava reached them from the corridor and took Kelm off his feet.

Aren redirects a contractor’s cutting tool as a civic officer tackles him beside the shielded evidence trolley; Liora watches a frightened worker holding an identification badge.

ValeSwitch off. Now.

OfficerLet it go!

WorkerMy pass—I can show you—

SennBlue badge. Her hand’s holding a badge.

An officer turned toward the other worker as she reached into her jacket. Liora saw the corner of the identification card emerge and called it before anyone mistook it for a weapon. The officer kept his distance and ordered her to set it down. She obeyed, crying without sound. Aren held Kelm’s tool arm against the floor until the cutter went dark, then released it when the officer had control. The protective shield was scored. The core inside was untouched.

SennLeave the badge there. Keep your hands where she can see them.

WorkerI didn’t know.

SennTell the officer what you were told to do.

06

00:44 · The secured equipment bay

How quickly he finds the weakness

The struck officer was conscious and receiving treatment. Kelm sat restrained, watched by two others. Dava permitted Aren to clarify the technical instruction he had shouted during the struggle. Kelm denied knowing what was in the case and asked whether his sister was being arrested. She was the worker with the blue badge. Aren looked through the glass at her, then back at him.

Dava interrupts Aren as he questions the restrained contractor; behind glass Liora stands near the shaken worker.

ValeWho told you to cut the housing?

KelmI told you. I don’t know what it is. My sister wasn’t involved.

ValeThen give me something that separates her from you. Otherwise the report can make this look like a job you took together.

DavaVoss. Step away.

He stopped speaking. The speed of it was almost worse than an argument; he could turn the pressure off as neatly as he had applied it. Dava told Kelm that his sister’s involvement would be assessed from evidence, not traded against his answers. She ended Aren’s participation and had the exchange retained. Outside, Liora helped the woman find a chair with a clear view of the officer taking her statement. She did not promise that the woman would be released.

SennDid he give you a name?

ValeNo.

SennYou were going to put that on her.

ValeI was going to make him believe I would.

SennShe would have heard it too.

07

00:52 · The evidence desk

What neither of them takes

The core’s service port recognized the format of Aren’s retrieval token. Liora’s audit tool could independently request a session through the contractor’s diagnostic interface. Neither tool had yet been connected. Dava would retain the hardware regardless; the question was whether they would disclose those means of access or force her team to discover them later. Aren placed his token on the desk. Liora laid hers beside it.

Aren and Liora stand beside the sealed core case as a municipal officer records two surrendered access tokens.

ValeMine can open a service session. It isn’t a shipping authorization.

SennThis one can request an audit export. The access profile is on it.

DavaBoth get examined before use. No connection to either faction.

They signed separate acknowledgments. Dava’s engineer recorded the tokens, closed the case and took it to the isolated workstation with the recovered maintenance data. The spies would receive only the findings the commander authorized. Aren watched until the officer turned the corner. Liora was still beside him when he looked back. For once, neither had a concealed copy to make the concession smaller.

SennI thought you’d take it.

ValeSo did I.

08

01:07 · Emergency communications desk

An answer, not an arrival

The reply arrived on the next diplomatic packet. Tessaran dispatch verified its routing before putting it on Dava’s screen. Stratus had acknowledged the warning, requested the receiver records and offered a containment specialist subject to Tessaran authorization and a safe means of entry. No arrival time was attached. Dava sent the request to the municipal duty authority while the engineer opened a separate finding from the core.

Dava receives a diplomatic reply while Ressa and the spies study a marked remote basin on the station display.

EngineerThe contract suffix appears in the authenticated service history. It accompanies a commissioning package for another receiving facility.

RessaWhere?

EngineerSerevan. Kestrel Basin. There’s a surveyed site reference and an attached labor assignment. Eight names.

The names matched the eight unaccounted-for technician entries on the returning carriage’s manifest. The package described work at an unfinished receiver; it did not establish that the facility was operational or that the workers were still alive. Halven’s story now had a location investigators could test. Dava ordered the data preserved and asked for a survivor interview only when the medical team and the survivor agreed. The civic duty authority authorized the request for Stratus assistance. The reply went out with the site reference attached.

DavaRequest authorized. Entry arrangements still pending.

SennEight names is enough to start looking.

ValeAnd a place to ask about.

Beyond the control-room glass, the receiving arch remained under guard. The local connection was still restricted, the core was in Tessaran custody, and the request for a Stratus specialist had entered the diplomatic relay.

08TECHNICIANS ASSIGNED TO KESTREL BASINSEREVAN · CURRENT STATUS UNKNOWN

MedicSerat. Your transport is ready. We need that hand imaged.

SennKeep a copy of the findings for me.

ValeAsk Dava.

SennI was asking Dava.

The commander looked up from the report. Aren almost smiled. Liora left with the medic and an escort; this time he did not mistake her departure for an invitation to work around her.

END OF EPISODE 07

THE EIGHT HAVE A DESTINATION.

A surveyed site.
An unfinished receiver.

Continue with Episode 08 — The Space Between.

Read the complete episode as text

False Courtesy — Terms of Return

By MacksWords. Episode 07.

01. What survives a clearing

Ressa and a municipal engineer examine the copper calibration core in a protective cradle while Aren watches.

The engineers opened the annex from the service side after isolating its machinery. They did not touch the receiving controller. Dava sent an officer with the inspection team and kept both spies outside. When the core reached the examination room, it was still locked in its cradle. Halven supplied the release sequence on record. The wafer beside it could no longer be read. Ressa asked the engineer to turn the core until its maintenance port faced the camera.

Ressa: The booth archive clears. This keeps its own service history.

Engineer: Signed maintenance events. We can test whether they’ve been altered. That doesn’t make every entry honest.

Vale: Does removing the core clear them?

Engineer: Not if we preserve its state.

Aren remembered a line in his collection instructions: housing intact, service state preserved. He had assumed his employers wanted the calibration settings. He told Dava about the instruction before she had to ask. Liora watched the engineer attach a read-only adapter. Halven’s promised wartime correction chain was on the unreadable wafer, not in this hardware log. She waited for someone to offer a clever way of recovering it. Nobody did.

Senn: You were told not to reset it.

Vale: Yes. I didn’t know why.

Dava: Give me the instruction as you received it.

Private assessments

Vale: He could still describe the omission as a technical detail he had not understood. It was also something he had kept out of the first report. Dava opened a supplement and waited.

Senn: She had wanted the wafer to survive badly enough that the intact core felt like an insult. That was a dangerous way to look at evidence. She stepped back from the bench.

02. The price of a seat

Halven bargains through the custody glass with Dava and Liora, his composure beginning to fail.

Dava laid a copy of the return authorization against the glass. Halven read it without lifting his head. Liora stood beside her, her injured hand protected against her coat. The director asked whether the core had been recovered. Dava asked why the carriage had a place reserved for him. For several seconds the only sound was the ventilation fan.

Halven: They required the hardware. I was to bring it through after the demonstration.

Senn: Four people were your demonstration?

Halven: Four people returned through a working receiver. That was what the client wanted verified.

Dava: And the other eight?

Halven: Assigned to a construction site. I wasn’t given their release terms.

He gave them a contract suffix and told them which service event it should accompany. The engineer confirmed a matching entry over Dava’s earpiece. It established that Halven knew the record, not that his account of the people was true. When she asked for the client’s name, he looked toward the door. He wanted protected custody outside the contractor’s reach before saying more. Dava explained that he was already entitled to protection from harm. She would not trade immunity for a name.

Halven: You don’t understand who can find me.

Dava: Then tell us what access they have.

Senn: You knew they could find the workers’ families. You signed anyway.

Private assessments

Vale: From the observation station, Aren heard the contract suffix match. He marked one corroborated detail and left the rest unconfirmed. Halven was becoming more credible in a way that made him more dangerous to believe.

Senn: Fear made the director sound smaller. It did not change the scale of what he had arranged. She let the silence remain after her question instead of filling it with a threat.

03. An advantage denied

Aren and Liora face each other at close range in a narrow rainlit station corridor.

While Aren supplied his collection instructions, Liora asked Dava to retain the core under Tessaran authority and refuse any faction’s private recovery claim. Dava said that was already her intention, then entered the request in the incident record. Aren saw it when the commander asked both spies to identify their access tools. He waited until they stepped into the corridor, still within sight of the supervising officer.

Vale: You asked her to keep it from me.

Senn: From both our governments.

Vale: You could have told me.

Senn: Would you have agreed?

Vale: You didn’t ask.

She stood close enough that he could see where the medic’s tape had caught a strand of hair against her collar. He remembered smoothing that collar for a camera earlier in the night. She followed his glance and pulled the strand free with her left hand. Neither stepped away. The silence held until the officer called them back to the desk.

Senn: Tell me you wouldn’t have tried to take a copy.

Vale: I was looking for a way.

Senn: Then you understand the request.

Vale: I understand why you made it.

Private assessments

Vale: He was angry that she had anticipated him correctly. There was another grievance beneath it: he had begun expecting her to warn him before making his choices harder. He had not earned that expectation.

Senn: Dava would have refused a private claim without her intervention. She had made the request partly to prevent an argument she did not want to have with him. Now they were having it anyway.

04. The order already issued

Dava and Ressa examine a service authorization during a call with Tovan as a recovery vehicle approaches the guarded court.

The maintenance log carried a contractor service code that Tovan’s retained index could explain. Through his advocate, Dava requested a short call. He answered from Mara’s study after confirming that the call would not expose his husband’s location. On screen, he enlarged the order and found its original issue time: 21:12, before the spies’ credentials appeared in the control log. It was a standing contingency for a failed service cycle, not a response invented after the rescue.

Tovan: That authorizes recovery of damaged equipment. It doesn’t authorize disposal.

Ressa: The vehicle outside has a disposal rig.

Tovan: Then check the attachment. The ones we retained don’t match.

A licensed contractor crew had arrived at the outer cordon with authentic dispatch credentials. Three workers had been admitted to the examination bay under escort to identify their assigned equipment. Nobody had granted a removal. Tovan showed Dava where the disposal authority had been added after issue. She ordered the vehicle held, every access pass suspended and the equipment bay stopped. Ressa called the officer inside that bay directly.

Dava: Nobody moves equipment. Keep the crew apart while we verify the order.

Tovan: They’ll tell you it’s a routine amendment.

Dava: They can explain it on the record.

Private assessments

Vale: The contingency could have been placed hours or weeks earlier. Someone had planned for failure without knowing exactly how it would happen. That was less theatrical than an enemy who predicted everything, and harder to dismiss.

Senn: Tovan had kept the version his employer expected him to discard. She had once looked at him and seen access to a file. He was the reason they could now tell which file had changed.

05. Before the tool touches metal

Aren redirects a contractor’s cutting tool as a civic officer tackles him beside the shielded evidence trolley; Liora watches a frightened worker holding an identification badge.

The stop order reached the bay as a worker called Kelm lifted a powered cutter from the tools he had declared at entry. He was meant to identify its service connector for the escort. Instead, he struck the officer with the handle and lunged toward the shield over the core. Aren caught the movement from the doorway. He redirected the cutter arm with his left hand and drove Kelm against the trolley’s outer rail. Dava reached them from the corridor and took Kelm off his feet.

Vale: Switch off. Now.

Officer: Let it go!

Worker: My pass—I can show you—

Senn: Blue badge. Her hand’s holding a badge.

An officer turned toward the other worker as she reached into her jacket. Liora saw the corner of the identification card emerge and called it before anyone mistook it for a weapon. The officer kept his distance and ordered her to set it down. She obeyed, crying without sound. Aren held Kelm’s tool arm against the floor until the cutter went dark, then released it when the officer had control. The protective shield was scored. The core inside was untouched.

Senn: Leave the badge there. Keep your hands where she can see them.

Worker: I didn’t know.

Senn: Tell the officer what you were told to do.

Private assessments

Vale: The dressing pulled against his scraped left wrist as he held the arm down. It stung after he let go. He checked the core before he checked the fallen officer. The order of those glances stayed with him.

Senn: The worker had made a frightened, ordinary mistake. Senn recognized it in time. She also recognized how easily she might have read the same movement differently if the woman had worn an Ordan enemy’s uniform.

06. How quickly he finds the weakness

Dava interrupts Aren as he questions the restrained contractor; behind glass Liora stands near the shaken worker.

The struck officer was conscious and receiving treatment. Kelm sat restrained, watched by two others. Dava permitted Aren to clarify the technical instruction he had shouted during the struggle. Kelm denied knowing what was in the case and asked whether his sister was being arrested. She was the worker with the blue badge. Aren looked through the glass at her, then back at him.

Vale: Who told you to cut the housing?

Kelm: I told you. I don’t know what it is. My sister wasn’t involved.

Vale: Then give me something that separates her from you. Otherwise the report can make this look like a job you took together.

Dava: Voss. Step away.

He stopped speaking. The speed of it was almost worse than an argument; he could turn the pressure off as neatly as he had applied it. Dava told Kelm that his sister’s involvement would be assessed from evidence, not traded against his answers. She ended Aren’s participation and had the exchange retained. Outside, Liora helped the woman find a chair with a clear view of the officer taking her statement. She did not promise that the woman would be released.

Senn: Did he give you a name?

Vale: No.

Senn: You were going to put that on her.

Vale: I was going to make him believe I would.

Senn: She would have heard it too.

Private assessments

Vale: He had not intended to falsify the report. He had intended to use the possibility of it. The difference mattered to him more than it would have mattered to the woman behind the glass.

Senn: She could see the calculation still working in his face. It frightened her less than it should have. There were things she understood about him that she did not want to mistake for acceptance.

07. What neither of them takes

Aren and Liora stand beside the sealed core case as a municipal officer records two surrendered access tokens.

The core’s service port recognized the format of Aren’s retrieval token. Liora’s audit tool could independently request a session through the contractor’s diagnostic interface. Neither tool had yet been connected. Dava would retain the hardware regardless; the question was whether they would disclose those means of access or force her team to discover them later. Aren placed his token on the desk. Liora laid hers beside it.

Vale: Mine can open a service session. It isn’t a shipping authorization.

Senn: This one can request an audit export. The access profile is on it.

Dava: Both get examined before use. No connection to either faction.

They signed separate acknowledgments. Dava’s engineer recorded the tokens, closed the case and took it to the isolated workstation with the recovered maintenance data. The spies would receive only the findings the commander authorized. Aren watched until the officer turned the corner. Liora was still beside him when he looked back. For once, neither had a concealed copy to make the concession smaller.

Senn: I thought you’d take it.

Vale: So did I.

Private assessments

Vale: He had not stopped wanting the data. He had put the means of taking it into someone else’s hands. The loss was concrete enough that he could not decorate it as a tactical delay.

Senn: She wanted to touch him and was angry at the timing of that impulse. Instead she stayed beside him until the case was gone. It was something she could offer without pretending the last room had not happened.

08. An answer, not an arrival

Dava receives a diplomatic reply while Ressa and the spies study a marked remote basin on the station display.

The reply arrived on the next diplomatic packet. Tessaran dispatch verified its routing before putting it on Dava’s screen. Stratus had acknowledged the warning, requested the receiver records and offered a containment specialist subject to Tessaran authorization and a safe means of entry. No arrival time was attached. Dava sent the request to the municipal duty authority while the engineer opened a separate finding from the core.

Engineer: The contract suffix appears in the authenticated service history. It accompanies a commissioning package for another receiving facility.

Ressa: Where?

Engineer: Serevan. Kestrel Basin. There’s a surveyed site reference and an attached labor assignment. Eight names.

The names matched the eight unaccounted-for technician entries on the returning carriage’s manifest. The package described work at an unfinished receiver; it did not establish that the facility was operational or that the workers were still alive. Halven’s story now had a location investigators could test. Dava ordered the data preserved and asked for a survivor interview only when the medical team and the survivor agreed. The civic duty authority authorized the request for Stratus assistance. The reply went out with the site reference attached.

Dava: Request authorized. Entry arrangements still pending.

Senn: Eight names is enough to start looking.

Vale: And a place to ask about.

Private assessments

Vale: Serevan had not appeared in the collection brief he had been given. That could mean his employers knew less than he feared. It could also mean they had known exactly how little to tell him.

Senn: She wanted to believe the assignment meant the eight were alive. She read the distinction in the engineer’s report twice before allowing herself to look at the map.

A place to begin

Beyond the control-room glass, the receiving arch remained under guard. The local connection was still restricted, the core was in Tessaran custody, and the request for a Stratus specialist had entered the diplomatic relay. 08 · TECHNICIANS ASSIGNED TO KESTREL BASIN. SEREVAN · CURRENT STATUS UNKNOWN.

Medic: Serat. Your transport is ready. We need that hand imaged.

Senn: Keep a copy of the findings for me.

Vale: Ask Dava.

Senn: I was asking Dava.

The commander looked up from the report. Aren almost smiled. Liora left with the medic and an escort; this time he did not mistake her departure for an invitation to work around her.