DESPIES BY MACKSWORDS
Vale and Senn disagree over a crossing isolation control in the maintenance annex.

A DESPIES WEBCOMIC · EPISODE 05 / WHAT WE KEEP

FALSE
COURTESY

Ten lives to recover.
Two covers to lose.

TESSARA · OUTSIDE THE SPOTLIGHT

The cost of
keeping their word.

Previously: Aren Voss and Liora Serat revealed the wartime losses behind their rivalry. Their investigation led to ten missing transit specialists and a warning that the annex would be sealed if both spies arrived.

Nine minutes remain before the service cycle. Someone inside is already resisting, the director knows what each operative wants, and their promise to call Stratus if containment fails is about to matter.

Mature themes · Lethal gun violence, captivity, coercion and serious injury. Non-graphic artwork.

VEYRAN COMPACT

“Mr Vale”

Cover: infrastructure risk adviser.
Real name: Aren Voss.

ORDAN LEAGUE

“Ms Senn”

Cover: technical partnerships representative.
Real name: Liora Serat.

EPISODE 05 · EIGHT ILLUSTRATED SCENES

What We Keep

A passage held open. A prisoner kept alive. A report that names them both.

05 / WHAT WE KEEP
Text version
01

23:32 · Maintenance annex · service entrance

Someone is already fighting

The fault lamp failed, recovered, then failed again at precisely the same interval. Senn compared it with Nera’s maintenance log. That circuit had passed inspection yesterday. Through the grille, a woman with closely shaved silver hair watched them instead of the panel. Senn fastened her raincoat over the emerald gown and held up her empty left hand. The woman opened the door a finger’s width.

Vale and Senn listen at a partly open maintenance door. Beyond it, Ressa stands beside an amber fault indicator.

RessaIf you’re here to repair it, fuck off.

SennHow long have you been delaying them?

RessaSince they brought the carriage back. Who are you?

ValePeople who can get a message outside.

Her name was Ressa. All ten missing workers were in the annex, she said; one could not walk. Nera’s plan showed this entrance, but only Ressa could release its inner latch. Vale called municipal emergency dispatch on the local channel, gave the location and requested officers and medical transport at the outer service court. He let Ressa hear the dispatcher repeat it. Only then did she open the door.

RessaI’ve heard promises all week.

ValeKeep the line open. Ask them yourself.

02

23:33 · Annex control vestibule

The switch between them

The service cycle was seven minutes away. Vale found the local isolation control and checked the supply diagram. Cutting the feed would prevent the scheduled departure. Senn followed the same circuit to the annex shutters. The emergency reserve would close them first. The maintenance door Ressa had opened would be locked until someone reset it from the protected side.

Vale pauses above an isolation control while Senn points at the evacuation path with her left hand.

ValeWe isolate it now. They lose the departure.

SennAnd we lock the workers in with their guards.

ValeLeave it live and the carriage can move.

SennGive me a passage before you close a crossing.

He looked at her. She heard what she had said and did not apologize for it. Ressa stepped between their lines of sight. She could hold the inner access open from a local station while the workers crossed the service corridor. Vale could cover that corridor. Senn could reach the booth where the director controlled the cycle. It would leave the crossing powered for several more minutes. None of them called that safe.

RessaArgue while we move. The man on the floor doesn’t have time for your history.

ValeI’ll keep the passage clear.

SennI’ll take the booth.

03

23:34 · The annex operations booth

What they came to take

The booth door was open when they reached it. Director Halven stood behind its glass, composed enough to make Senn slow down. Vale recognized the copper calibration core from his collection specification. Beside it lay a wafer displaying the header of Senn’s wartime correction. Halven addressed them by their real names. Ressa stayed back to release the workers.

Director Halven faces the two spies through safety glass. A calibration component and an amber data wafer rest beside him.

HalvenVoss. Your collection was withdrawn, not shipped. It’s still available.

ValeWho told you what I was collecting?

HalvenSomeone who expected you to want it. Serat—your correction survived. I have the chain that kept it out of the final report.

SennYou have a header.

HalvenI have the rest.

She leaned close enough to recognize a routing mark. Vale’s eyes remained on the core. Each noticed the other’s pause. Halven offered them the objects in exchange for leaving the annex under his control. Neither answered before a shout came from the service corridor. He swept the wafer into the core’s security cradle and shut its lid. Senn stayed on him as Vale turned toward the noise.

ValeThe workers leave first.

HalvenThat isn’t the arrangement I’m offering.

SennWe heard you.

04

23:35 · The service corridor

No room for a warning

Ressa had released the inner latch. The first workers were moving when a contract guard stepped out beside the carriage access. He raised his weapon toward them. Vale fired before the man finished bringing it level. The guard struck the wall and fell. Vale kept his pistol on him until he saw the weapon slide clear. The man did not move again.

Vale aims down a service corridor toward an armed contract guard; the escaping workers are outside the frame.

ValeStay behind me. Keep moving.

WorkerIs he dead?

ValeYes.

The shots left a hard ringing in the corridor. Ressa flinched when Vale turned toward her, then forced herself to look past him and count the people at the door. Her hands were shaking. She continued calling each worker by name. Vale moved the fallen weapon out of reach and reported the shooting over the open emergency channel. He did not call it a warning shot or an accident.

RessaPelin. Osta. Through the door. Look at me.

ValeHow many still inside?

RessaFour. Including Joren. He can’t stand.

05

23:36 · The annex operations booth

The man she keeps alive

Halven reached beneath the desk when the shots sounded. Senn drew with her left hand. He stopped with a compact pistol halfway clear of its bracket. She ordered him to drop it and move away. It hit the floor. He backed into the cabinet, then sat. Her supported right hand throbbed beneath the coat; she could feel the pulse in her teeth.

Senn stands several paces from Halven with her pistol lowered in her left hand. He sits against a cabinet with empty hands raised.

HalvenI surrender.

SennI heard you.

HalvenThen lower it.

She kept the weapon level for another breath. He was disarmed. So had the broker been. The distinction she wanted—between a man who deserved to die and a man she was entitled to kill—would not appear just because she waited. She lowered the muzzle to the floor. Then she made Halven state his name and his role into the open recorder, leaving his refusals on the record too.

SennYou’re coming out alive. You’re going to answer for this.

HalvenYou won’t like who else has to answer.

SennTry me.

06

23:38 · The maintenance passage

The one who cannot walk

Nine workers could walk. Joren could not. The guards had beaten him after an earlier attempt to interrupt the transfer; he lay conscious beneath an insulation sheet, struggling to answer Ressa. A wheeled maintenance litter stood in the next bay. Behind the booth glass, the security cradle began clearing its local archive. Opening it without Halven’s cooperation would take time they no longer had.

Vale and Ressa guide a wheeled litter carrying Joren. Senn walks alongside with a communicator in her left hand and her injured right hand protected.

RessaI’m not leaving him.

ValeGet the litter.

SennThe wafer is in that cradle.

ValeAnd the core. I know.

She looked once at the cabinet, then put Halven into the custody of the first civic officer reaching the passage. Another worker helped Ressa settle Joren onto the litter. Vale guided it with his uninjured hand; Senn walked beside them, relaying the medic’s questions and keeping the exit clear. Behind them, the archive indicator went dark and the annex shutters began to descend. The core stayed inside. Nobody turned back.

JorenAm I slowing you down?

SennYes. We’re taking you anyway.

RessaKeep your eyes on me. You can apologize when you’re annoying me at work again.

07

23:40 · Outer control room · service court

The promise reaches its limit

Ressa counted ten living workers in the outer service court. The medics took Joren first. Halven remained under guard. Vale and Senn reached the public-side controls as the service cycle began. With the workers clear, Vale ordered a shutdown through municipal dispatch. The local feed dropped. The crossing’s status changed to incoming. Its receiver stayed lit on the service reserve.

From the outer control room, the crossing glows beyond the wet service court. An amber console signals an incoming connection.

DispatcherShutdown request rejected by the receiving controller. We’re bringing the transit engineers in.

ValeCan you hold it closed?

DispatcherNot from this panel. We can’t confirm containment.

SennThen send the Stratus warning. Now.

It was the same physical crossing they had traced all evening. Nobody needed to discover another route to admit that they had lost control of this one. Vale sent the location, the incoming status and the Coven evidence to the dispatcher for immediate relay while he assembled the fuller account. Tessara’s diplomatic message circuit was open; dispatch confirmed that it could carry an addressed emergency packet. That was a means of sending, not a promise of rescue.

ValeEvacuate the public platforms. Keep the medical route separate.

DispatcherUnder way. Your report goes on the next packet.

08

23:41 · The emergency communications desk

What goes on the record

Vale attached the preserved files, both factions’ purchasing records and the timeline. He identified himself as Aren Voss and Senn as Liora Serat. He distinguished the evidence of trafficking from what they could only suspect about their governments. Their false credentials, the pressure put on local witnesses, and the decision to delay outside help remained in the account. Then he turned the screen so she could read it.

Vale composes a report at an amber terminal while Senn reads beside him. Both retain their wrist and hand dressings.

SennYou wrote that I killed the broker after he surrendered.

ValeYou did.

SennLeave it.

His own shootings were listed separately with the circumstances he claimed, for investigators to test. The warning already in dispatch’s hands would not wait for an argument over wording. Senn checked the evacuation count, added that Halven’s promise about Keth Reach was unverified, and entered her acknowledgment with her left hand. Vale saved her amendment. Neither asked the other to remove a name.

SennThat report burns us.

ValeYes.

SennSend it.

Vale transmitted the packet. Tessaran dispatch confirmed that the diplomatic relay had accepted it for onward delivery to Stratus. There was no reply from Stratus yet, and no arrival time.

10WORKERS ACCOUNTED FORWARNING SENT · CROSSING NOT CONTAINED

DispatcherMedical convoy is moving. No response from the interworld duty desk yet.

SennAren.

ValeI’m here.

SennWatch the crossing.

Beyond the glass, the light deepened. They stayed at the desk long enough to see the report leave, then turned back toward it together.

END OF EPISODE 05

THE WARNING HAS LEFT TESSARA.

Help is not
here yet.

Continue with Episode 06 — A Courtesy Extended.

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False Courtesy — What We Keep

By MacksWords. Episode 05.

01. Someone is already fighting

Vale and Senn listen at a partly open maintenance door. Beyond it, Ressa stands beside an amber fault indicator.

The fault lamp failed, recovered, then failed again at precisely the same interval. Senn compared it with Nera’s maintenance log. That circuit had passed inspection yesterday. Through the grille, a woman with closely shaved silver hair watched them instead of the panel. Senn fastened her raincoat over the emerald gown and held up her empty left hand. The woman opened the door a finger’s width.

Ressa: If you’re here to repair it, fuck off.

Senn: How long have you been delaying them?

Ressa: Since they brought the carriage back. Who are you?

Vale: People who can get a message outside.

Her name was Ressa. All ten missing workers were in the annex, she said; one could not walk. Nera’s plan showed this entrance, but only Ressa could release its inner latch. Vale called municipal emergency dispatch on the local channel, gave the location and requested officers and medical transport at the outer service court. He let Ressa hear the dispatcher repeat it. Only then did she open the door.

Ressa: I’ve heard promises all week.

Vale: Keep the line open. Ask them yourself.

Private assessments

Vale: He had nearly introduced them as investigators again. Tovan’s face came to mind before the word reached his mouth. He gave her a connection she could test instead.

Senn: The repeating fault was simple enough to dismiss as poor equipment. Ressa had used the guards’ contempt for her work to buy time. Senn recognized the skill before she knew the woman’s name.

02. The switch between them

Vale pauses above an isolation control while Senn points at the evacuation path with her left hand.

The service cycle was seven minutes away. Vale found the local isolation control and checked the supply diagram. Cutting the feed would prevent the scheduled departure. Senn followed the same circuit to the annex shutters. The emergency reserve would close them first. The maintenance door Ressa had opened would be locked until someone reset it from the protected side.

Vale: We isolate it now. They lose the departure.

Senn: And we lock the workers in with their guards.

Vale: Leave it live and the carriage can move.

Senn: Give me a passage before you close a crossing.

He looked at her. She heard what she had said and did not apologize for it. Ressa stepped between their lines of sight. She could hold the inner access open from a local station while the workers crossed the service corridor. Vale could cover that corridor. Senn could reach the booth where the director controlled the cycle. It would leave the crossing powered for several more minutes. None of them called that safe.

Ressa: Argue while we move. The man on the floor doesn’t have time for your history.

Vale: I’ll keep the passage clear.

Senn: I’ll take the booth.

Private assessments

Vale: He moved his hand away from the switch. It felt like surrendering the one decision he could control. That did not make pressing it the right decision.

Senn: She had used Keth Reach to make him hesitate. The electrical risk was real. So was the satisfaction she had felt when the words landed. She needed to keep those facts separate.

03. What they came to take

Director Halven faces the two spies through safety glass. A calibration component and an amber data wafer rest beside him.

The booth door was open when they reached it. Director Halven stood behind its glass, composed enough to make Senn slow down. Vale recognized the copper calibration core from his collection specification. Beside it lay a wafer displaying the header of Senn’s wartime correction. Halven addressed them by their real names. Ressa stayed back to release the workers.

Halven: Voss. Your collection was withdrawn, not shipped. It’s still available.

Vale: Who told you what I was collecting?

Halven: Someone who expected you to want it. Serat—your correction survived. I have the chain that kept it out of the final report.

Senn: You have a header.

Halven: I have the rest.

She leaned close enough to recognize a routing mark. Vale’s eyes remained on the core. Each noticed the other’s pause. Halven offered them the objects in exchange for leaving the annex under his control. Neither answered before a shout came from the service corridor. He swept the wafer into the core’s security cradle and shut its lid. Senn stayed on him as Vale turned toward the noise.

Vale: The workers leave first.

Halven: That isn’t the arrangement I’m offering.

Senn: We heard you.

Private assessments

Vale: The serial markings matched. That was enough to make him imagine salvaging the original mission. It was not enough to explain how Halven had obtained it or what accepting it would buy the director.

Senn: The header could be genuine while every promise attached to it was false. She knew that. She still wanted to put her hand through the glass and take it.

04. No room for a warning

Vale aims down a service corridor toward an armed contract guard; the escaping workers are outside the frame.

Ressa had released the inner latch. The first workers were moving when a contract guard stepped out beside the carriage access. He raised his weapon toward them. Vale fired before the man finished bringing it level. The guard struck the wall and fell. Vale kept his pistol on him until he saw the weapon slide clear. The man did not move again.

Vale: Stay behind me. Keep moving.

Worker: Is he dead?

Vale: Yes.

The shots left a hard ringing in the corridor. Ressa flinched when Vale turned toward her, then forced herself to look past him and count the people at the door. Her hands were shaking. She continued calling each worker by name. Vale moved the fallen weapon out of reach and reported the shooting over the open emergency channel. He did not call it a warning shot or an accident.

Ressa: Pelin. Osta. Through the door. Look at me.

Vale: How many still inside?

Ressa: Four. Including Joren. He can’t stand.

Private assessments

Vale: He had killed because the guard was about to fire into the passage. He would make the same decision again. Ressa’s flinch was also something he had caused; his reasons did not require her to be comfortable beside him.

Senn: Senn heard two shots from the booth and could not see who had fallen. Halven watched her face for the answer. She gave him nothing and kept her attention on his hands.

05. The man she keeps alive

Senn stands several paces from Halven with her pistol lowered in her left hand. He sits against a cabinet with empty hands raised.

Halven reached beneath the desk when the shots sounded. Senn drew with her left hand. He stopped with a compact pistol halfway clear of its bracket. She ordered him to drop it and move away. It hit the floor. He backed into the cabinet, then sat. Her supported right hand throbbed beneath the coat; she could feel the pulse in her teeth.

Halven: I surrender.

Senn: I heard you.

Halven: Then lower it.

She kept the weapon level for another breath. He was disarmed. So had the broker been. The distinction she wanted—between a man who deserved to die and a man she was entitled to kill—would not appear just because she waited. She lowered the muzzle to the floor. Then she made Halven state his name and his role into the open recorder, leaving his refusals on the record too.

Senn: You’re coming out alive. You’re going to answer for this.

Halven: You won’t like who else has to answer.

Senn: Try me.

Private assessments

Vale: At the booth entrance Vale saw Halven sitting with his hands raised and Senn’s pistol pointed down. He did not praise her. He asked whether the director had another weapon, and checked when she said she did not know.

Senn: Keeping him alive did not give the broker his life back. She wanted credit for stopping herself and disliked how badly she wanted it. Halven was still watching her; she kept the gun down.

06. The one who cannot walk

Vale and Ressa guide a wheeled litter carrying Joren. Senn walks alongside with a communicator in her left hand and her injured right hand protected.

Nine workers could walk. Joren could not. The guards had beaten him after an earlier attempt to interrupt the transfer; he lay conscious beneath an insulation sheet, struggling to answer Ressa. A wheeled maintenance litter stood in the next bay. Behind the booth glass, the security cradle began clearing its local archive. Opening it without Halven’s cooperation would take time they no longer had.

Ressa: I’m not leaving him.

Vale: Get the litter.

Senn: The wafer is in that cradle.

Vale: And the core. I know.

She looked once at the cabinet, then put Halven into the custody of the first civic officer reaching the passage. Another worker helped Ressa settle Joren onto the litter. Vale guided it with his uninjured hand; Senn walked beside them, relaying the medic’s questions and keeping the exit clear. Behind them, the archive indicator went dark and the annex shutters began to descend. The core stayed inside. Nobody turned back.

Joren: Am I slowing you down?

Senn: Yes. We’re taking you anyway.

Ressa: Keep your eyes on me. You can apologize when you’re annoying me at work again.

Private assessments

Vale: He had a clear view of the core until the shutter hid it. Losing the assignment had felt different when it was only a closed collection window. This time he watched the thing he wanted become unreachable.

Senn: She had seen enough of the header to believe the wafer might matter. She had not obtained the evidence, and Halven could still lie about what it contained. She chose Joren without pretending she would never resent the loss.

07. The promise reaches its limit

From the outer control room, the crossing glows beyond the wet service court. An amber console signals an incoming connection.

Ressa counted ten living workers in the outer service court. The medics took Joren first. Halven remained under guard. Vale and Senn reached the public-side controls as the service cycle began. With the workers clear, Vale ordered a shutdown through municipal dispatch. The local feed dropped. The crossing’s status changed to incoming. Its receiver stayed lit on the service reserve.

Dispatcher: Shutdown request rejected by the receiving controller. We’re bringing the transit engineers in.

Vale: Can you hold it closed?

Dispatcher: Not from this panel. We can’t confirm containment.

Senn: Then send the Stratus warning. Now.

It was the same physical crossing they had traced all evening. Nobody needed to discover another route to admit that they had lost control of this one. Vale sent the location, the incoming status and the Coven evidence to the dispatcher for immediate relay while he assembled the fuller account. Tessara’s diplomatic message circuit was open; dispatch confirmed that it could carry an addressed emergency packet. That was a means of sending, not a promise of rescue.

Vale: Evacuate the public platforms. Keep the medical route separate.

Dispatcher: Under way. Your report goes on the next packet.

Private assessments

Vale: He had hoped the shutdown would leave them a narrow path out of scrutiny. The rejected command removed that hope. He knew what their agreement required before Senn said it.

Senn: Saying Stratus aloud felt like handing someone the key to every locked room in her mission. She said it anyway. She would not spend another person’s time trying to preserve her cover.

08. What goes on the record

Vale composes a report at an amber terminal while Senn reads beside him. Both retain their wrist and hand dressings.

Vale attached the preserved files, both factions’ purchasing records and the timeline. He identified himself as Aren Voss and Senn as Liora Serat. He distinguished the evidence of trafficking from what they could only suspect about their governments. Their false credentials, the pressure put on local witnesses, and the decision to delay outside help remained in the account. Then he turned the screen so she could read it.

Senn: You wrote that I killed the broker after he surrendered.

Vale: You did.

Senn: Leave it.

His own shootings were listed separately with the circumstances he claimed, for investigators to test. The warning already in dispatch’s hands would not wait for an argument over wording. Senn checked the evacuation count, added that Halven’s promise about Keth Reach was unverified, and entered her acknowledgment with her left hand. Vale saved her amendment. Neither asked the other to remove a name.

Senn: That report burns us.

Vale: Yes.

Senn: Send it.

Private assessments

Vale: He had expected to feel exposed. He had not expected the steadiness of letting her see the entire report before he sent it. It was not trust he could demand she return.

Senn: The report could end her mission and bring charges she would have to answer. Standing beside him did not make those consequences shared equally. It meant he would not be the only one claiming the account was true.

The warning leaves Tessara

Vale transmitted the packet. Tessaran dispatch confirmed that the diplomatic relay had accepted it for onward delivery to Stratus. There was no reply from Stratus yet, and no arrival time. 10 · WORKERS ACCOUNTED FOR. WARNING SENT · CROSSING NOT CONTAINED.

Dispatcher: Medical convoy is moving. No response from the interworld duty desk yet.

Senn: Aren.

Vale: I’m here.

Senn: Watch the crossing.

Beyond the glass, the light deepened. They stayed at the desk long enough to see the report leave, then turned back toward it together.