DESPIES BY MACKSWORDS
Vale and Senn pose as an intimate pair under a transit promenade's surveillance camera.

A DESPIES WEBCOMIC · EPISODE 02 / NIGHT SHIFT

FALSE
COURTESY

Close enough to convince.
Too close to trust.

TESSARA · OUTSIDE THE SPOTLIGHT

Their covers hold.
Their agreement strains.

Previously: Vale and Senn found evidence of a Coven trafficking operation beneath a Tessaran reception. They rescued Ilen, but Senn killed a surrendered broker whose testimony—and authority—they needed.

Forty-three more workers are due to leave at 23:40. Ten earlier captives remain missing. To stop another departure, the rival spies must share control with each other and with the woman they rescued.

Mature themes · Coercion, captivity and lethal violence. Non-graphic artwork.

VEYRAN COMPACT

“Mr Vale”

Cover: infrastructure risk adviser.
Real name: undisclosed.

ORDAN LEAGUE

“Ms Senn”

Cover: technical partnerships representative.
Real name: undisclosed.

EPISODE 02 · EIGHT ILLUSTRATED SCENES

Night Shift

Forty-three workers. Two rival spies. A rescue that neither can carry out alone.

02 / NIGHT SHIFT
Text version
01

20:42 · The balcony service alcove

What the key cannot do

The key opened the manifest. Changing it required the supervisor's live confirmation. Vale read the refusal twice, then turned the display toward her. Rain ticked against the glass behind them.

A locked dispatch terminal separates Vale and Senn as they argue in a rain-lit service alcove. He holds the broker's key; she meets his stare.

ValeHe could have diverted them.

SennYes.

ValeYou might try saying something after that.

SennI killed him. I can't make him sign. Tell me what the terminal still allows.

His jaw tightened. She let the silence stand. The screen offered a local maintenance hold: one way to stop boarding without changing the interworld destination.

ValeYou don't get to decide who's expendable.

SennThen don't make that decision quietly when it's your turn.

02

20:47 · The maintenance refuge

Someone they know

Ilen had put her shoes on and found the crew directory. The refuge smelled of hot dust and tea leaves. Vale suggested she wait there while they moved the workers.

Ilen stands over a route map in the maintenance refuge while both spies listen. She wears her recovered work shoes and points toward a municipal clinic.

IlenMoved them where?

ValeSomewhere safe.

IlenThat's what they told us.

SennWhere would you take them?

IlenThe municipal night clinic. I know the staff. And I'll tell my crew why we're going.

Senn slid the call unit across the table. Ilen spoke to the night clinician herself. She asked for examinations, two transport chairs, and a room where nobody would be taken away alone.

IlenThere were eleven of us. I'm only one.

ValeThe other ten stay on the list. Show us how to keep forty-three more off it.

03

20:55 · The delegates' transit promenade

A convincing pair

The dispatch gallery lay beyond the delegates' promenade. Two guests returning separately from a restricted stairwell would invite questions. Senn glanced at the camera above the arch, then at his arm.

Under a promenade surveillance camera, Senn takes Vale's offered arm. They pose as an intimate pair, watching each other with attraction and suspicion.

SennMay I?

ValeYou could sound less pleased.

SennYou could look less like you're escorting a prisoner.

He offered his arm. She stepped close enough for her hair to brush his collar, while he kept his free hand in his pocket. From the concourse, it looked effortless. Neither of them mistook it for ease.

ValeI used to memorize that accent before deployments.

SennI learned yours from intercepted casualty reports.

ValeKeep smiling.

SennI'm trying.

04

21:03 · Local dispatch

An available pressure point

The night clerk's credential appeared on the eleven transfers. Vale put the copied entries beside his keyboard and spoke softly enough that the waiting crew could not hear.

Vale places an incriminating data wafer on a dispatch clerk's desk. The frightened clerk keeps his hands in view while Senn watches from the door.

ClerkI entered what the supervisor sent. I didn't choose them.

ValeYour account moved them. It can put a hold on this platform.

ClerkThey'll know it was me.

ValeThen help us leave a record of why you did it.

When the clerk reached for the call button, Vale covered it with his hand. Senn watched the man look from the blocked button to the wafer. She recognized the calculation; Vale had left him very little room.

SennGive him something he can survive.

ValeI can't promise that.

SennThen start with what you can.

05

21:10 · The routing gallery

Read the destination

The clerk offered the standard alternative: return the crew to employer housing. Senn compared the housing operator's account with the freight payments. Her hand stopped above Vale's before he accepted the route.

Shoulder to shoulder at a routing table, Senn points out a corporate mark shared by a dormitory and freight intake. Vale withdraws a pending diversion request.

SennSame owner. Different name.

ValeThey'd collect them at the dormitory.

SennWith a new supervisor and a new departure.

ValeClinic, then. As Ilen asked.

He withdrew the request. Together they recorded the clerk's account of his work, leaving the contradictions intact. The clerk chose to authorize a local inspection hold. It would need a control operator and a second person at the manual interlock; neither spy could do both.

ValeYou caught that quickly.

SennYou stopped quickly.

ValeDon't sound so surprised.

06

21:18 · Platform inspection control

On your word

The interlock was older than the display above it. Setting a hold required someone at the platform switch while a second operator confirmed the lane was clear. Senn held it while Vale entered the clerk's authorized hold. The console logged both their guest credentials beside the clerk's authorization. Through the glass, she could see his hands but not his screen.

Separated by a glass partition, Senn holds a manual inspection switch while Vale confirms the diversion at a console. They watch each other for the signal.

SennHow long?

ValeUntil the platform latch engages. Watch the amber light.

SennYou have the credential. You could leave me here.

ValeYou have the switch. You could close the lane on them.

SennThat wasn't reassuring.

ValeIt wasn't meant to be.

The amber inspection lamps came on. Beyond the glass, the workers began following Ilen toward the municipal shuttle. Vale kept the route visible and raised his empty hand where Senn could see it.

ValeStill here.

SennI can see you.

07

21:24 · The municipal boarding lane

Forty-one is not forty-three

Ilen counted forty-one aboard. Across the lane, one worker was trying to carry another who could no longer put weight on his ankle. The driver asked whether they were ready to leave. Senn kept her hand against the open door.

Vale supports an older worker with an injured ankle toward the waiting shuttle. Another worker walks beside them. Senn holds the door while Ilen welcomes them aboard.

SennTwo still coming.

ValeI see them.

DriverI can't sit here all night.

SennYou won't have to. Keep the step down.

Vale went back across the lane. He caught his wrist on a damaged rail while helping the injured man, swore, and adjusted his grip. The other worker refused to leave his colleague's side. They reached the shuttle together. Ilen counted again before the driver closed the doors.

IlenForty-three.

SennAll of them?

IlenEvery name.

08

21:32 · Outside the municipal night clinic

Nothing settled

At the clinic, Ilen gave her own account to the night staff. The workers went inside in small groups. Senn found Vale on the sheltered stair, pressing a paper towel to his wrist. She held out a dressing and waited. After a moment, he gave her his hand.

On a sheltered clinic stair, Senn dresses a scrape on Vale's offered wrist. He watches her with wary attention while staff receive the workers inside.

SennYou tore it helping him stand.

ValeI noticed.

SennThen hold still.

She worked carefully around the scrape. He could feel the warmth of her fingers through the damp cuff. When she finished, he did not immediately pull away. Neither looked toward the clinic window.

ValeThis doesn't settle what happened upstairs.

SennI know.

ValeAnd the ten who are still missing.

SennI know that, too.

The stolen dispatch key received a response to their inspection hold. The broker's credential had authorized its cancellation at 21:31—nearly an hour after Senn killed him.

21:31INSPECTION HOLD CANCELLEDAUTHORITY: FREIGHT SUPERVISOR

ValeA delayed instruction?

SennNo. It answers the hold we just filed.

ValeThen somebody else has his authority.

SennAnd our two guest credentials, from the control log.

Inside, forty-three people were being called by name. Outside, both spies looked up at the same passing patrol.

END OF EPISODE 02

SOMEONE ELSE IS STILL AT WORK.

Their names are
in the control log.

Continue with Episode 03 — The Price of Quiet.

Read the complete episode as text

False Courtesy — Night Shift

By MacksWords. Episode 02.

01. What the key cannot do

A locked dispatch terminal separates Vale and Senn as they argue in a rain-lit service alcove. He holds the broker's key; she meets his stare.

The key opened the manifest. Changing it required the supervisor's live confirmation. Vale read the refusal twice, then turned the display toward her. Rain ticked against the glass behind them.

Vale: He could have diverted them.

Senn: Yes.

Vale: You might try saying something after that.

Senn: I killed him. I can't make him sign. Tell me what the terminal still allows.

His jaw tightened. She let the silence stand. The screen offered a local maintenance hold: one way to stop boarding without changing the interworld destination.

Vale: You don't get to decide who's expendable.

Senn: Then don't make that decision quietly when it's your turn.

Private assessments

Vale: He wanted her to look ashamed. That would not put a living supervisor back at the desk. He saved the refusal with the rest of the evidence, including the time of the broker's death.

Senn: She had expected anger. His careful preservation of what she had done was harder to dismiss. She did not ask him to delete it.

02. Someone they know

Ilen stands over a route map in the maintenance refuge while both spies listen. She wears her recovered work shoes and points toward a municipal clinic.

Ilen had put her shoes on and found the crew directory. The refuge smelled of hot dust and tea leaves. Vale suggested she wait there while they moved the workers.

Ilen: Moved them where?

Vale: Somewhere safe.

Ilen: That's what they told us.

Senn: Where would you take them?

Ilen: The municipal night clinic. I know the staff. And I'll tell my crew why we're going.

Senn slid the call unit across the table. Ilen spoke to the night clinician herself. She asked for examinations, two transport chairs, and a room where nobody would be taken away alone.

Ilen: There were eleven of us. I'm only one.

Vale: The other ten stay on the list. Show us how to keep forty-three more off it.

Private assessments

Vale: She had heard a promise of safety from someone with better clothes before. He had nearly made the same promise without giving her enough information to judge it.

Senn: Ilen's hands shook when the clinician answered. Her voice did not. Senn moved the hot kettle away from her elbow and kept listening.

03. A convincing pair

Under a promenade surveillance camera, Senn takes Vale's offered arm. They pose as an intimate pair, watching each other with attraction and suspicion.

The dispatch gallery lay beyond the delegates' promenade. Two guests returning separately from a restricted stairwell would invite questions. Senn glanced at the camera above the arch, then at his arm.

Senn: May I?

Vale: You could sound less pleased.

Senn: You could look less like you're escorting a prisoner.

He offered his arm. She stepped close enough for her hair to brush his collar, while he kept his free hand in his pocket. From the concourse, it looked effortless. Neither of them mistook it for ease.

Vale: I used to memorize that accent before deployments.

Senn: I learned yours from intercepted casualty reports.

Vale: Keep smiling.

Senn: I'm trying.

Private assessments

Vale: Her fingers rested on his forearm. He was uncomfortably aware of each small adjustment. He watched the camera's reflection in the window because watching her had become less practical.

Senn: He changed his stride to match hers without looking down. The small courtesy irritated her more than their necessary closeness. They stayed together until they were past the second camera.

04. An available pressure point

Vale places an incriminating data wafer on a dispatch clerk's desk. The frightened clerk keeps his hands in view while Senn watches from the door.

The night clerk's credential appeared on the eleven transfers. Vale put the copied entries beside his keyboard and spoke softly enough that the waiting crew could not hear.

Clerk: I entered what the supervisor sent. I didn't choose them.

Vale: Your account moved them. It can put a hold on this platform.

Clerk: They'll know it was me.

Vale: Then help us leave a record of why you did it.

When the clerk reached for the call button, Vale covered it with his hand. Senn watched the man look from the blocked button to the wafer. She recognized the calculation; Vale had left him very little room.

Senn: Give him something he can survive.

Vale: I can't promise that.

Senn: Then start with what you can.

Private assessments

Vale: The clerk might have been complicit, frightened, or both. Vale was using the same pressure either way. He could preserve a statement; he had no authority to promise immunity.

Senn: Vale had not drawn a weapon. He had still made the man afraid to move. Fear could get them a hold; it could also send him running to the first person who offered protection.

05. Read the destination

Shoulder to shoulder at a routing table, Senn points out a corporate mark shared by a dormitory and freight intake. Vale withdraws a pending diversion request.

The clerk offered the standard alternative: return the crew to employer housing. Senn compared the housing operator's account with the freight payments. Her hand stopped above Vale's before he accepted the route.

Senn: Same owner. Different name.

Vale: They'd collect them at the dormitory.

Senn: With a new supervisor and a new departure.

Vale: Clinic, then. As Ilen asked.

He withdrew the request. Together they recorded the clerk's account of his work, leaving the contradictions intact. The clerk chose to authorize a local inspection hold. It would need a control operator and a second person at the manual interlock; neither spy could do both.

Vale: You caught that quickly.

Senn: You stopped quickly.

Vale: Don't sound so surprised.

Private assessments

Vale: He had wanted the departure stopped badly enough to accept the first available destination. She had checked where the people would actually end up.

Senn: He did not disguise the correction as his own idea. She noticed. Then she checked the clinic route a second time, because noticing him had already cost her a few seconds.

06. On your word

Separated by a glass partition, Senn holds a manual inspection switch while Vale confirms the diversion at a console. They watch each other for the signal.

The interlock was older than the display above it. Setting a hold required someone at the platform switch while a second operator confirmed the lane was clear. Senn held it while Vale entered the clerk's authorized hold. The console logged both their guest credentials beside the clerk's authorization. Through the glass, she could see his hands but not his screen.

Senn: How long?

Vale: Until the platform latch engages. Watch the amber light.

Senn: You have the credential. You could leave me here.

Vale: You have the switch. You could close the lane on them.

Senn: That wasn't reassuring.

Vale: It wasn't meant to be.

The amber inspection lamps came on. Beyond the glass, the workers began following Ilen toward the municipal shuttle. Vale kept the route visible and raised his empty hand where Senn could see it.

Vale: Still here.

Senn: I can see you.

Private assessments

Vale: She had to keep holding until he confirmed the latch. He made every movement slow enough for her to follow. It was the closest he could offer to trust without asking her to take his word alone.

Senn: She had watched that hand kill a guard and help a stranger. Now she watched it remain within sight. When he signaled that the hold had latched, she let go.

07. Forty-one is not forty-three

Vale supports an older worker with an injured ankle toward the waiting shuttle. Another worker walks beside them. Senn holds the door while Ilen welcomes them aboard.

Ilen counted forty-one aboard. Across the lane, one worker was trying to carry another who could no longer put weight on his ankle. The driver asked whether they were ready to leave. Senn kept her hand against the open door.

Senn: Two still coming.

Vale: I see them.

Driver: I can't sit here all night.

Senn: You won't have to. Keep the step down.

Vale went back across the lane. He caught his wrist on a damaged rail while helping the injured man, swore, and adjusted his grip. The other worker refused to leave his colleague's side. They reached the shuttle together. Ilen counted again before the driver closed the doors.

Ilen: Forty-three.

Senn: All of them?

Ilen: Every name.

Private assessments

Vale: The lane was exposed, the inspection hold conspicuous, and their faces recorded. He could calculate the risk later. The man leaning against him was trying to apologize for his ankle.

Senn: She had kept the door open without looking for Vale's agreement. He had gone back without waiting for hers. For a few seconds, neither had needed to negotiate.

08. Nothing settled

On a sheltered clinic stair, Senn dresses a scrape on Vale's offered wrist. He watches her with wary attention while staff receive the workers inside.

At the clinic, Ilen gave her own account to the night staff. The workers went inside in small groups. Senn found Vale on the sheltered stair, pressing a paper towel to his wrist. She held out a dressing and waited. After a moment, he gave her his hand.

Senn: You tore it helping him stand.

Vale: I noticed.

Senn: Then hold still.

She worked carefully around the scrape. He could feel the warmth of her fingers through the damp cuff. When she finished, he did not immediately pull away. Neither looked toward the clinic window.

Vale: This doesn't settle what happened upstairs.

Senn: I know.

Vale: And the ten who are still missing.

Senn: I know that, too.

Private assessments

Vale: Her care was real. So was the dead broker. Holding both facts in mind was less comfortable than deciding what sort of person she was.

Senn: He had given her the injured hand without concealing the other. She fastened the dressing and made herself let go. There was still work neither of them could finish alone.

A dead man's authorization

The stolen dispatch key received a response to their inspection hold. The broker's credential had authorized its cancellation at 21:31—nearly an hour after Senn killed him. 21:31 · INSPECTION HOLD CANCELLED. AUTHORITY: FREIGHT SUPERVISOR.

Vale: A delayed instruction?

Senn: No. It answers the hold we just filed.

Vale: Then somebody else has his authority.

Senn: And our two guest credentials, from the control log.

Inside, forty-three people were being called by name. Outside, both spies looked up at the same passing patrol.